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Tuesday, 20 May 2014

Writing Workshop


Our next Writing Workshop is on 
Thursday 19 June, 6pm
in the staffroom.
I look forward to seeing you! 

Writing Supports

There are some fantastic websites which the children can use independently or with you. They are fun and engaging.


http://www.switchzoo.com/zoo.htm Create your own animal and have fun writing about it

http://www.piclits.com/compose_dragdrop.aspx A range of inspiring photos and supporting vocabulary

http://www.scholastic.com/teachers/story-starters/ Story Starters to get the ball rolling

http://www.funenglishgames.com/writinggames.html A range of fun writing activities

Setting Goals

Ask your child what their writing goals are and how they intend to attain them.
In class they will be discussing their Learning Intentions.
Recently we have been working towards Adding descriptive language to our writing. We will know we have achieved this when we have used metaphors in our writing. 
We monitor our own and others writing for support.

5Ws and H

Encourage lots of quality oral language in order to build ideas. Use the 5 Ws Who, What, Where, When and Why. Also ask How.
Prompt your child to use these prompts also. Use them wherever you are and whatever you are doing, whether reading a book or driving in the car.

Friday, 9 May 2014

Writing Workshop

Atawhai Writing Workshop
Wednesday 14 May 2014
Holy Cross Catholic School Staffroom
6.30pm

Roselyn's Mum


Mum
Mum looks like a beautiful blossoming rose growing in the garden.
Mum sounds like an angel singing sweet songs.
Mum smells like a delicious apple pie that has just come out of the oven.
Mum tastes like yummy chocolate brownies with whipped cream and a cherry on top.
Mum feels like the warmth of a puppy's soft fur.
Mum

My Mum by Emily



Mum
Mum looks like a famour popstar from the 90s.
Mum sound like an actor from her favourite show.
Mum sounds like a beautiful butterfly landing gently on a flower.
Mum smells like a high class chef cooking the best cheesecake in the world.
Mum tastes like a warm crunchy pop that was just heated up.
Mum feels like a new born chick with really soft fur.
Mum